Above: Front cover (left) and back cover (right) after feedback! (drawn)
FRONT COVER ANALYSIS:
why did i do it like this?
based upon feedback from my audience and the artist, i made several changed to the initial design, the only thing that everyone was happy with was the sticker, so i kept that there, everything else has been changed, even the graffiti, isn't as "street" anymore, its more "sharp" looking, and i've even drawn kingsta in a better pose as everyone suggested, and i kept it just to two-tone colours, red and white (and black in necessary areas)
AUDIENCE FEEDBACK
person 1: its great! i actually like it now!
person 2: this is MUCH better! it even looks creative!
person 3: best thing you can do to make it look like this, is to use the "threshold" effect in photoshop, make it red and white!
person 4: this is ALOT better! i'd think about buying it if i saw it in shops! good job!
person 5: well done! it looks more "grimey" because of the pose! i can even clock on that the genre of this artist is grime! because he's posing like a typical grime artist!
person 6: hmm..you could have made it red and black to be honest
person 7: i like it! keep it! make it real!
person 8: good job! MUCH better than the first! doesn't look tacky anymore!
ARTIST FEEDBACK
i like it! i actually do, make it ALL red and white though! maybe a little black but not alot, and adidas hoodie should work, just edit it to make it all red and white, much better than the first idea! this should work!
BACK COVER ANALYSIS
why did i do it like this?
everyone was saying scrap my original idea, and just stick on a logo or something, so i settled on putting the uk grime logo on the back, and the colours would match with the front, and its not too extravagant either! and its simple like everyone wanted!
person 1: hmmm..i dont really like it...why not just put graffiti on the back?
person 2: it doesn't work..i thought it would..but it doesn't go with the front, just put graffiti on the back
person 3: i think it works! good job!
person 4: that's more of an inside cover thing..
person 5: just put the artists name on the back mate!
person 6: its not really working well, the colours dont work well with the front, just do red and white graffiti!
person 7: it works! MUCH better than the initial idea!
person 8: doesn't really work..just put KINGSTA in red and white graffiti!
ARTIST FEEDBACK
hmm..its better than the first...but your audience is right, its more of an inside cover thing? its not really going to work because its too colourful compared to the front, i reccommend just making the back a red and white graffiti logo of my name! so it matches the front! thats all i can say on this one! good try!
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